Lesson 15

• fellowship, family and good scene was good 
• Singing was awful
• Energy was lost when people started loosing it 
• The songs are about the acting put your all into it as you would when saying your lines songs ( literal and metaphorical links to religion) 
• Clarity of what we are doing and gaining the confident to do the choice strong
• The storm was a joke just dragged 
• Make bigger choices to fit the space
• Make sure to know your objectives in all scenes  
• Make a stronger structure for the tsunami scene 
• Party scene was awkward because of fear 
• Too cramped on the sides so opening it up to sitting on three sides 
• Share dolls with audience not just to ourselves 
• In jokes in the fellowship scene made it stronger and better 
• End the death scene when we all stop moving 

After sharing all our notes we made from the run through we then proceeded to fix up all the transitions made within all the scene so everyone was confident in what they were doing. After fixing a transition we ran through that scene and the next to see if it all worked. This was a long process and we were unable to get to the end but it was very beneficial for us all and we are all now clear on certain things. There was a motif added to our physical theatre scene that simplifies the play which included goods and it fitted in nicely.